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Zuzana Rybaříková moved page User talk:Zuzka to User talk:Zuzana Rybaříková: Automatically moved page while renaming the user "Zuzka" to "Zuzana Rybaříková"
Thank you very much.
Lucie Hrubcová
Dear Ms Rybaříková,
thank you for your answer.
I have taken into consideration your comments and made following changes:
* the quotation marks are unified
* the quotation, which I used twice (about FDA regulation), is used only one time rewritten in my own words now.
* where it was needed, I tried to rewrite the references, I added some info, where was missing (eg pages or link)
* I have left the quotations, which are said directly by the scientists, in original version
* the reference to all bullet point sentences in Public and Media section is available above for all of them (19) 'headlines such a..', this was written in a study, which I refer to (19)
* The information with psyche is my own, thatswhy is there no reference, should I delete it?
I hope, that everything is already complete.
Kind Regards
Lucie Hrubcová
Dear Ms Rybaříková,
the final corrections are done. I tried to edit the references you were talking about (BBC, Youtube..). The information about psyche is deleted. And a link to the Manual is already ok and works.
Please could you chceck it and let me know.
Thank you very much.
Kind regards
Lucie Hrubcová
