Talk:Neuroon

Dear editor,

thank you for your contribution. I have two suggestions for you. Firstly, consider if the Infobox for Wearables would not be better. If I understand the device correctly there is no display, hence a great deal of categories of Head-Mounted Displays do not apply on it. Secondly, take into account that you should write an entry of virtual encyclopedia, i.e. you should be neutral. The part 'Having trouble staying awake and falling asleep? Fighting Jet Lag? Looking for an edge?' is inappropriate. Check some other entries, in order to see how the introductory part looks like.

If you have some questions or suggestions, do not hesitate to let me know. --Zuzka (talk) 11:25, 18 October 2016 (CEST)