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Please change the infobox category "wearables" to "limb-mounted". --[[User:Haustein|Haustein]] ([[User talk:Haustein|talk]]) 10:56, 14 October 2015 (CEST)
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Multiple Infobox values of one category, such as sensors, need to have a semantic property attached to them individually. Find out how to do it in [[Semantic_wiki_formatting#Dealing_with_multiple_values]].
The weight and price semantic values in the infobox should be numbers only. Remove the "from" part or move it outside the semantic wiki tag.
When you are mentioning the price of the device in the infobox, write down the time of the moment of writing the information. Prices change with time and what costs 249 USD now, may not cost the same next year.
Please break down the Main characteristics section into multiple paragraphs. This 'wall-of-text' is very hard on the eyes.
Proofread your text. There are several expressions that don't make much sense (e.g. "The Watch is special in four chips which measure heart rate from your wrist." or "It could appear the same addicted problem to be still online") in English and need rewriting.
In the Company and People section, make a new line for each person and their role. The same goes for the information in the Important dates section. Additionally for this section, add relevant references should you find them.
The explanation in the Ethical section is very brief and shallow. It also lacks any references.
Health risk section is missing references. In fact, there are no references whatsoever!
Public and media section is empty. And so are the next sections.
--[[User:Haustein|Haustein]] ([[User talk:Haustein|talk]]) 11:56, 16 November 2015 (CET)
