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Latest revision as of 07:09, 14 August 2017

Dear Ms Rybaříková,

I´ve completed the article about TDCS-KIT. Some information from discussion on reddit website was added and I made a correction of references, it should be all in the same format now. Please let me know, if some more changes are needed or if it is already ok.

Thank you very much.

Lucie Hrubcová


Dear Ms Rybaříková,

thank you for your answer. I have taken into consideration your comments and made following changes:

  • the quotation marks are unified
  • the quotation, which I used twice (about FDA regulation), is used only one time rewritten in my own words now.
  • where it was needed, I tried to rewrite the references, I added some info, where was missing (eg pages or link)
  • I have left the quotations, which are said directly by the scientists, in original version
  • the reference to all bullet point sentences in Public and Media section is available above for all of them (19) 'headlines such a..', this was written in a study, which I refer to (19)
  • The information with psyche is my own, thatswhy is there no reference, should I delete it?

I hope, that everything is already complete.

Kind Regards

Lucie Hrubcová


Dear Ms Rybaříková,

the final corrections are done. I tried to edit the references you were talking about (BBC, Youtube..). The information about psyche is deleted. And a link to the Manual is already ok and works.

Please could you chceck it and let me know.

Thank you very much.

Kind regards

Lucie Hrubcová