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--[[User:Haustein|Haustein]] ([[User talk:Haustein|talk]]) 15:55, 12 November 2015 (CET)
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The infobox category is incorrect. It should reflect the lowest level category the entry is in.
Add more references to the infobox.
Add a date to the price that shows when you wrote the price down.
The two values for Controls are incorrectly joined into one.
Refrain from using review like language such as "There is no need to charged" or "Big advantage for the buyers is". Use neural, factual style of writing. Remember, you are writing an academic text, not a tech review.
Do not you second person narrative "you" because of the reasons stated above.
Company and People section is missing.
Important Dates needs more references added. Preferably add a reference to each of the date.
Under Health Risks, you wrote "no proven risks were confirmed with those wearables". But what wearables? What risks? Expand on this a bit more, please.
State clearly, whether Moto 360 is enhancement or therapy or treatment.
Public and Media presentation should be expanded with information from reviews and such. How is the device actually portrayed in the media. How was is accepted among the users. Search blogs, discussions and so on.
The second paragraph under Public Policy could be better. Especially the reference.
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